View Full Version : Want to review my site? Please? (:
Annen
07-16-2008, 10:05 AM
I'll pay you in kvp! - Suggest your price (:
I'm just so in the mood to make up my site, but I'm a little lost. I think that a few really good, constructive reviews would help.
I'd like to give out points, but I hardly have any yet, so if that's what you want, we'll make a deal. I could instead offer a link in my sidebar the rest of the month, if you want :b
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I'll pay 150 kvp for a constructive review? (: Please, I need this, and I know you're freaking bored anyway (A)
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I decided to higher the price further. I'll pay 500 kvp for a constructive review (:
Daveo: Annen, please stop posting to bump your threads and then deleting them to bump again later. It's not fair to the other members and their threads. I've warned you a few times about this already.
rintakase
07-31-2008, 09:17 PM
I'll pay you in kvp! (:
I'm just so in the mood to make up my site, but I'm a little lost. I think that a few really good, constructive reviews would help.
I'd like to give out points, but I hardly have any yet. I could instead offer a link in my sidebar the rest of the month, if you want :b
Firstly , I'm replying your thread for fun , not for the KV points ( which I don't really know what it's for (?) ) So you don't have to pay me . (:
So here's how, I'm writing my suggestions below and hopefully you could understand that I'm not insulting your site .. I'm just reviewing it as you've asked ^_^
Suggestions :
1. You should place your links ( left hand side ) to the right hand side , below your 'I forgot to dream in colour' . ( That's my first thought (: ) Because it really does looks weird as the right hand side would look .. empty ! ( unless you've planned to add some contents soon )
2. The background is fine , but I suggest you add some patterns on it ? horizontal lines , vertical lines etc . Make it simple but not too plain . Because your layout is simple and nice ( i like it ) so maybe you can improve on your background ^_^
So that's what I'm thinking . Sorry if you feel that I'm giving bad opinions .. that's what I think the first time I go to your site x.x hope you don't mind ^_^
Annen
08-01-2008, 07:25 AM
Thank you so much for bothering with reviewing it. Of course I understand that any critics are meant in the best way, you've obviously not given me any reason to feel insulted xD Well, some buy things for the kvp, but I don't use them myself (: I'll give you a little just for the effort of replying.
I actually tried with some patterns (98% transparent), but it mostly made it look like a circus xD I might have to try again, see if I can find something really, really simple but elegant ;)
I'll move the sidebar and the logo on my next layout (: That's what I planned anyway. I hardly ever use the same template for two layouts xD
rintakase
08-01-2008, 07:34 AM
Thank you so much for bothering with reviewing it. Of course I understand that any critics are meant in the best way, you've obviously not given me any reason to feel insulted xD Well, some buy things for the kvp, but I don't use them myself (: I'll give you a little just for the effort of replying.
I actually tried with some patterns (98% transparent), but it mostly made it look like a circus xD I might have to try again, see if I can find something really, really simple but elegant ;)
I'll move the sidebar and the logo on my next layout (: That's what I planned anyway. I hardly ever use the same template for two layouts xD
lols D: circus x.x ? what do you mean by 98% transparent ? o.o ?
and anyway , thanks for the donation ^_^ but i don think i will use it though .. x.x
Annen
08-01-2008, 07:41 AM
That if you use a black/white pattern, it's very sharp. When it's just 8% shown it'll be visible, but not overtaking. Like the tiles on this icon:
http://annen.dk/artfolio/icon03.jpg
Well, then you might just become the richest member someday :D
hey, you're site is really nice, i love the colours, I think though that your big i forgot to dream in colour picture should be above your navigation and you should ditch the right navigation
rintakase
08-01-2008, 08:04 AM
That if you use a black/white pattern, it's very sharp. When it's just 8% shown it'll be visible, but not overtaking. Like the tiles on this icon:
http://annen.dk/artfolio/icon03.jpg
Well, then you might just become the richest member someday :D
oh okay thanks i understand that now ^_^
Annen
08-23-2008, 04:14 AM
Emzi - Hehe, you're not the only one thinking that, I see ;D
rintakase - Omg, I just made you a little smarter (:
rintakase
08-23-2008, 07:13 AM
rintakase - Omg, I just made you a little smarter (:
hm ? p,p ...
anyway i went to your site again and the fonts are big ... am i seeing things wrongly or you just changed the font's sizes ?
amberlyth
08-23-2008, 01:28 PM
Ditch the celeb header for one. Also, your styling isn't showing up in firefox. Putting in the full url instead of ../style.css should work. You have an extra ; in your body p tag in the styling. I'd also recommend switching to a tableless layout. They tend to be more flexible and easier to deal with.
I also put your css through the W3C validator: http://jigsaw.w3.org/css-validator/validator?profile=css21&warning=0&uri=http%3A%2F%2Fannen.dk%2Fstyle.css It's a good place to start if you're seeing errors in how your styling is displayed.
Annen
08-23-2008, 01:46 PM
Ditch the celeb header for one. Also, your styling isn't showing up in firefox. Putting in the full url instead of ../style.css should work. You have an extra ; in your body p tag in the styling. I'd also recommend switching to a tableless layout. They tend to be more flexible and easier to deal with.
I also put your css through the W3C validator: http://jigsaw.w3.org/css-validator/validator?profile=css21&warning=0&uri=http%3A%2F%2Fannen.dk%2Fstyle.css It's a good place to start if you're seeing errors in how your styling is displayed.
I corrected those two small things (: I'll check out the validation soon.
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