View Full Version : Reveiw me?
truelyscrumptious
05-18-2008, 04:50 AM
This is my first attempt at div layers and i would love to know what others think of it. Also some general advise on what kind of content i should be adding and what i could be doing to generate more interest would be greatly appreciated :)
BabyPinkEmmie
05-18-2008, 06:04 AM
I will review.
Layout : 9/10 it is absalutly beautiful i love the babies at the top! only improvement is perhaps it would be more effective if it was centred.
Content: 8/10 nice good quality items only improvement is maybe add a view glitters or myspace comments as these are popular and perhaps some layouts for people to use as clearly you are skilled in this area.
Text: 10/10 perfect spelling wonderful colour and font.
Navigation: 10/10 easy to get around the site I found it very enjoyable.
Extra notes: I love your site! You've clearly worked very hard :)
TOTAL: 38/40
:D
truelyscrumptious
05-18-2008, 09:20 AM
Thank you so much! I actually wanted to have the whole layout centered, but i couldnt figure out how to do it :P thanks again for the lovely reveiw! If you dont mind i'm going to put it on my "reveiws" page on my site :)
itsyvette
05-21-2008, 02:28 AM
I want to review your site too. :)
1. Your splash page is alright. But I guess its too plain? Perhaps try making an enter image. :) Other than that, the links are all neatly placed.
2. The layout is simple for me. But I definitely love the babies! And centering your layout may help. Jem's site has a tutorial for it, http://www.tutorialtastic.co.uk/tutorial/the_centering_cheat Good luck!
3. The navigation is also neat and easy to access. You can also try to glam up your navigations. You can read this tutorial if you want: http://www.tutorialtastic.co.uk/tutorial/semantic_css_block_navigation
* now I'm going over to all of the pages on your site *
Girl:
*About me- You've misspelled a word, occaisions should be occasion.
The blog archives shouldn't be place at your About Me. They should be placed under Site.
Wedding:
Wow, I've got through all of these pages. And I love your story. <33
Photo Album:
I don't see anything wrong here. :) Good job on this page.
Goodies:
You offer a lot of freebies. That's really nice. :)
Rules are well written as well as the disclaimer for each section.
You can try offering glitters.
Site:
As what I've stated above, your archives should be placed here as they belong to the site.
*Credits- graphhics should be spelled with only one 'h'.
Reveiw should be spelled with 'review.'
*Awards- you've misspelled won with wont.
Beauty:
Wow, you've offer a lot of tips! Thanks heaps for these. <33
Linkage:
Oops, a there's an error page. http://www.life-in-the-sun.com/links/vote.pho
That's all of I've noticed from looking and going through the details at your site. And I must say that your site is definitely helpful. :)
truelyscrumptious
05-22-2008, 12:06 AM
Thank you heaps for such a lovely reveiw! :) and thanks for pointing out those errors, i hadnt realised :) im going to fix them all now :) again, do you mind if i put the review on my site? :D
itsyvette
05-22-2008, 09:29 PM
^ You're always welcome. :)
Yeah sure you can put it in your site.
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